Alpha Female I

[Lone Wolf]

In my opinion a good roleplay, setting up a good series.

Opinons from you lot please.

[Danny Vice]

I didn't like it as much as the past few to be honest. I felt like it was a lot of description and emotion, which is good, but very little dialogue. Everything was short and in small bursts, to the point where the lack of real interaction between characters wasn't nearly as strong as your past work. Clearly, you're still an excellent writer, and this was good, but it just wasn't "Lone Wolf" good.

[Lone Wolf]

Thanks for the compliment, but about the lack of dialouge, I felt it was better to describe what was happening than just venturing off into un-needed dialouge.

[Zak Warner]

well Adam, since I know you tend to favor description over dialouge, it doesnt surprise me. I liked it though