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Post by Ryder on Apr 17, 2007 14:41:01 GMT -5
Hey guys. Just wondering what everybody thought of that last RP I just posted.
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Post by Danny Vice on Apr 17, 2007 15:02:19 GMT -5
to be honest: Studly. that's why you have back-to-back RP of the week.
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Post by Ryder on Apr 17, 2007 15:11:54 GMT -5
Studly? What a compliment. I don't think I've ever been so flattered. Seriously, I appreciate the feedback.
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Post by Ryder on Apr 17, 2007 16:24:22 GMT -5
Any more opinions out there? I'd be glad to hear them, good or bad. If bad, make it constructive at least lol.
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The Emperor
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The Hardcore Emperor
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Post by The Emperor on Apr 17, 2007 16:25:36 GMT -5
It was a nice RP, using the fog as a focused subject, and also using the Affilicition is good too... I wish I'm in your league of writing RPs...
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Post by Ryder on Apr 17, 2007 16:28:55 GMT -5
Hey you'll get there buddy. You've got potential. Now untapped potential? That's a killer. Just try to make yours a wee bit longer and mix up the colors and stuff. That always makes an RP look better. Set a mood and a background to what's going on. Talk about your match coming up but don't focus too much on it. Always try to sprinkle in little tidbits about your character and where he's coming from. Above all else, I'd say try to tell a story at the same time you're bashing the other guy lol.
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The Emperor
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The Hardcore Emperor
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Post by The Emperor on Apr 17, 2007 16:30:30 GMT -5
ok, thanks for tips...
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Post by Ryder on Apr 17, 2007 18:01:38 GMT -5
No problem stablemate. Any other feedback on my RP? I'd be especially interested in knowing what Jamal Carter and Xavier Cross thought of it. Not to mention Thunder, Reckless Jack, T-Money, and any others who would like to give their thoughts.
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Xavier Cross
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Post by Xavier Cross on Apr 17, 2007 19:29:01 GMT -5
Ryder apparently demanded my comments on his promo 'Through the Fog...' hahaha, nah i'm happy to get around to reviewing his RP, i love reading interesting things, and usually Ryder's posts are among those i love to read. I love the color, i'm a big fan of multi color posts, you used Aria very well, and then using the results the only other way someone could, i've never seen that before, and you did it very very well, all and all, its a high quality RP, am i lookin at the new United States champ, maybe? Ryder, def one of G.W.C's finest, oh and agreein on wat Dan the Man said, except i wanna add my only lil twist on it, very studirific hahaha
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Post by Ryder on Apr 17, 2007 20:00:08 GMT -5
lol Compliments galore. Thanks Xavier. And allow me to take this time to give my opinion on all of your RP's thus far. All really awesome lol. Good stuff and tough to beat. Darkness will have to pull out one hell of a two minute drive at the end of the game to win this one.
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Post by stevieriggs on Apr 18, 2007 6:17:44 GMT -5
Have to say, Im pretty impressed with some of your work, especially the "Through the Fog" rp. Pretty good stuff, keep at it.  |
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