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Post by Darkness/Felipe Salarose on Apr 14, 2007 13:35:12 GMT -5
I wouldn't mind getting your guys thoughts on any of my Rp's that I posted for ROT.
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Post by thetnaicon on Apr 14, 2007 14:11:00 GMT -5
Pretty d*mn good. I wish I could be in depth like that, but the way I created my guys, they are straight to the point. But if someone would give me their thoughts, good or bad, on my RP's, those thoguths would be appreciated.
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Post by thetnaicon on Apr 14, 2007 14:11:22 GMT -5
thoughts*
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Xavier Cross
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"Cross me, and you'll come to regret it..."
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Post by Xavier Cross on Apr 14, 2007 18:24:31 GMT -5
Darkness, you have the standard paragraph form of rping, and I was never able to use that to my advantage in e-fedding. I've noticed that your very well at the startard paragraph of thoughts, feelings and actions, then what you say is in italics. Not to mention i love reading your Promo's and then being like 'Wow, this guy really wants to test my gangsta' so for me, going against you awoke the muse that i long thought was gone, a competitive spirit i never thought would return to me. Right now, you have to be my toughest challenge in G.W.C. and I'm glad it came sooner than later so i might be able to get into my old groove as a solid 2-3 page basic promo kind of guy, hahaha look at the monster you awoke. Anyway, i'd def give your creativity a 5 outta 5, along with the sentence structure and flow, and its always very intersting to see what Darkness has cooked up.
Icon Corp, your a very experience e-fedder from what i have read, also, it seems that your characters are almost the 'perfect veteran' of wrestling. That leaves a tasteless character, i'd give them some flaws, not a bunch maybe just one or two things, like their prone to get cocky and underestimate their opponent. You know things that make them seem a bit weaker than how you put them. All in All, your good at writing promo's just keep your posting at the steady length and your def going to be good. Just think about the advice i gave you about your character.
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Post by thetnaicon on Apr 14, 2007 22:39:57 GMT -5
that is what i have tried to do xavier. that is why i had them set up to lose their tag match against affliction, b/c they underestimated them.
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Post by thetnaicon on Apr 14, 2007 22:40:41 GMT -5
plus, i only started e-fedding in jan. when GWC started.
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Xavier Cross
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"Cross me, and you'll come to regret it..."
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Post by Xavier Cross on Apr 14, 2007 22:50:17 GMT -5
oh wow, from the way you RP i figured otherwise, my mistake, very good for a beginner, keep it up!
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