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Post by Zak Warner on Apr 14, 2007 12:12:27 GMT -5
please and thank you
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Xavier Cross
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"Cross me, and you'll come to regret it..."
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Post by Xavier Cross on Apr 14, 2007 12:30:38 GMT -5
First off,
You have a very similiar style to Darkness, and I really like the way both of you R.P. the Set Up is very basic, and very nice. I think your sentence structure and the way it flowed was very nice.
4.7 outta 5
2nd,
I love reading with color, that's just me, people who take the time to edit the font color, and font style are def dedicated roleplayers, good choice of red you get bonus points for using my favorite color :-D
5.5 outta 5
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You moved very smoothly from your Reign of Terror match to challenging two teams, which is slightly hard to do, but i felt you did it well. Right now, in my opinion, if things stayed the same, you'd win your match at Reign of Terror, but for me I like to over kill things, so i'll do 5 or 6 extra posts to solidate my win. You do whatever, just a little friendly advice.
5 outta 5.
Over All, i suck at math so i'm going to assume you got an overall score of 5 plus the .5 bonus points, i really enjoyed your post, keep it up!
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Post by Danny Vice on Apr 14, 2007 12:30:46 GMT -5
solid opening rp. its hard when you dont have a backstory to the match to come up with a good rp, but you did. welcome to the gwc.
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Post by Zak Warner on Apr 14, 2007 16:54:48 GMT -5
any feedback on all RPs of mine can go here
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