Xavier Cross
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"Cross me, and you'll come to regret it..."
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Post by Xavier Cross on Apr 13, 2007 20:01:20 GMT -5
Well, I just worked hard on putting together a scene for the Pay Per View, and a little bit of Xavier's backround story. So check it out, rate it however you want, and give your opinion! I want both negative and posititive, it doesn't matter what, i want to improve my roleplaying, and this seems to be the best way to do that.
I mostly want feedback on Crossing THe Bridge, To the Road of Darkness, but if you feel like commenting on something else, be my guest
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Post by Danny Vice on Apr 14, 2007 12:31:27 GMT -5
your description seems to have improved immensely since you first arrived. RPs like those are what made you champ, and i look forward to more work from you
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Xavier Cross
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"Cross me, and you'll come to regret it..."
Posts: 256
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Post by Xavier Cross on Apr 14, 2007 12:33:37 GMT -5
Just keep the paychecks coming ;-)
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Post by stevieriggs on Apr 18, 2007 8:25:38 GMT -5
Good rps, really nice, just the whole wannabe Eminem/John Cena style is annoying. No offense. *Dyes your hair blond and plays "The Real Slim Shady."
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Xavier Cross
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"Cross me, and you'll come to regret it..."
Posts: 256
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Post by Xavier Cross on Apr 18, 2007 16:54:45 GMT -5
speaking of 'The Real Slim Shady' i have that song with Eminem doing it to the Billie Jean by Michael Jackson beat. I think i do the white gangster off nicely, i always got a laugh at the 'rapper' gimmick as Cena, but expect atleast after Kingdom Come for Xavier to start to change.....what was that?!?!!?!?!? Xavier Spoiler?!?!?!
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Post by stevieriggs on Apr 19, 2007 4:57:43 GMT -5
Hmmm, Xavier Spoiler. Going with a car mechanic gimmick? Or even better, be super original and make a trashman gimmick. You can ride into the arena on a trash truck and stuff, throw opponents and objects into the trash compactor in the back. Woo hoo! Pancakes for everyone!
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