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Post by Zak Warner on Aug 15, 2007 0:39:56 GMT -5
Ok, this was the first story RP i EVER wrote, and it is the first in a long series. The one i posted for assault is actually part two, and i will be posting them all in order, as well as some of Triple X's that intertwine.
BTW, Feedback?
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Post by Creeping Death on Aug 15, 2007 1:17:16 GMT -5
I'd read it if you put the names before the speech, not just color coding. It's too hard to remember.
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Post by Danny Vice on Aug 17, 2007 18:54:36 GMT -5
He's right, reading your RPs in that way does detract a little bit. After awhile, I refer to the people as the color, and not really the character ur using. Like I just know Blue will be a dickhead, so I progress as such, rather than saying like "Oh, that's Terrell Owens" or whatever ur describing.
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