"Midnight" Feedback

[Skyler Striker]

I don't ask for it often. This is the start of a new story, so don't expect to understand fully yet. Also, for anyone who wants full explanation of Skyler's background, go to skylerstriker.proboards59.com/index.cgi?board=wcf&page=2 to read about it, it's the roleplays with 'Origins' in them.

[Danny Vice]

yeah i was like "wait, what the...where does this fit in...oh, it's a new story"

i like how you did the spacings for the black outs, it made it more realistic while scrolling of skyler being blank. however, it was annoying too.