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Post by Murder Inc. on Jul 30, 2007 4:05:28 GMT -5
Any comments or suggestion. Open ears here.
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Post by alanbrooks on Jul 30, 2007 10:05:51 GMT -5
Hey, I liked it a lot. I checked out some of your other work as well, which are all good. They could improve much much more if you were to put an opening scene, and some delays in between text to describe what you are doing and such, movements your making, if there are people around, what they are doing, but still, I really like your work.
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