The Emperor
Ultimate Champion 
The Hardcore Emperor
Posts: 347
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Post by The Emperor on Jul 22, 2007 20:32:29 GMT -5
It was my first RP of the comeback of The Emperor, give me some feedback to improve on for the second one later...
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Post by Danny Vice on Jul 23, 2007 10:46:32 GMT -5
Yes, there we go. Much better. Good dialogue and a complete thought roleplay that gives us a good look at the motivations of The Emperor. Well done.
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Post by Cam Connor on Jul 23, 2007 20:02:55 GMT -5
Welcome back Emperor! Good stuff. From what I see, you're always improving.
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Post by Lexington "The Poet" Royale on Jul 24, 2007 2:08:22 GMT -5
I must agree with Mr. Connor. Slowly but surely you have upped your game. And considering the hardcore nature of your character, I believe our resident talk show host had better keep a close eye on his Ultimate Championship.  |
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The Emperor
Ultimate Champion
The Hardcore Emperor
Posts: 347
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Post by The Emperor on Jul 24, 2007 13:49:30 GMT -5
Any more feedbacks?? If not, I will go ahead and post the second RP tonight...
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Post by Ryder on Jul 24, 2007 19:06:49 GMT -5
Like I keep telling you, just develop your details more and more and you'll start raking in the victories and then some titles. Great job buddy.
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