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Post by Darkness/Felipe Salarose on Jul 18, 2007 0:44:20 GMT -5
I thought it was pretty solid. I tried to cut down on the swearing abit but any ways tell me what you think.
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Post by Danny Vice on Jul 18, 2007 10:13:15 GMT -5
The swearing I don't mind at all. Careful with spelling stuff, it isn't a huge deal, but you called yourself CXG in the opening paragraph. It was solid. Good story, cool idea to it, just felt like it was repetitive how you would do something, explain it's reference today, next thing, explain, repeat. But I'm just being overanalytical I think because you wrote such a badass RP last week. Well done, Felipe.
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