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Post by Lexington "The Poet" Royale on Jul 17, 2007 16:21:23 GMT -5
Last one for this week gents.
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Post by Danny Vice on Jul 17, 2007 16:30:34 GMT -5
haha i love the braveheart allusion at the end. excellent roleplay lexington. i look forward to seeing CXF's counter.
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Post by The Stargazer on Jul 17, 2007 17:45:22 GMT -5
im not a big fan of people explaining what is going on.
Like the whole 'the scene opens' and what have you, it makes the reader feel dumb.
but besides that solid, a little bland, but solid non the less.
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